Vision: The vision is great because the style you put as is awesome.
Originality: I can't not see any other design is similar with this idea and the style.
Technique: The technique is awesome because you use your own style.
Impact: The same thing as the technique and the background is great but ins't that great.
Anyway The design is awesome.
Joe Ronald Martin Nat-Khan English.
P.S. I hope this a fair critique not over the top.
P.S.S. Sorry there are 1 is repeating it self because I tried to full up the word minimum up.